1. Haiku Heights – White
softly patting the ground
2. Poetic Asides – Sci-fi
“Avon, teleport me!”*
I remember mid-grade.
“Zaan, assist me through!”**
a new century began.
Same message all over:
“Hey, you –
human, or else,
do something for me,
for I don’t want to be alone.”
©2012 Mariya Koleva
10 thoughts on “Sci-fi, Day 18”
I loved the Haiku… Simple Perfect!!!
And the poem to me makes all sense.
Life have so drastically changed over the period of time.
I liked the way you have expressed the whole worry, pain and agony in just few lines.
~Keep the Spark ALive..
‘Invisible snow’ softly patting the ground! – nice!
I don’t want to be alone!
Lonely in a connected world. I can truly understand the undercurrents of this composition! Loved it.
rachana – time elapses almost without notice, in fact. Thanks for reading and commenting!
sajeev – glad you enjoyed it!
ankush – this connected world actually makes it harder for humans to stay connected, a sad truth. Thanks for your visit and comment!
I loved the invisible snow… how cool 🙂
Keep bringing on the creativity
Dawn – thanks for your visit and the nice comment!
oops, I forgot the “e”
ZoralinQ (Dawn in the Forest of the Unknown…) – I appreciate your visit a lot! And thanks for the encouragement 🙂 In two different st/ages of my life those were my favourite series, in fact 🙂
Simply beautiful haiku and the story in the sci-fi poem nicely put. Good job! 🙂
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