Writing a Circular poem for today, Day 7 of the November Poem-A-Day Chapbook Challenge means we have to either write about something circular, or in a circular form, or whatever we prefer to associate “circular” with. This is a great prompt and I enjoyed it very much.
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Whenever I reach back
To remember you and me,
Hand in hand, strolling in the park
I have to turn my gaze and see
My little one
Remind me of myself,
Hand in hand with Daddy.
Her lovely chestnut curls,
Her shiny eyes like olives,
Her tiny hand in grip of mine,
Her slender body curled asleep
Just next to me,
Remind me of myself
and you, Dad.
The circle is complete.
© soulmary
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That’s lovely Mariya.
Veronica, thanks a lot for visiting my blog so regularly. I feel greatly encouraged by your words 🙂
What a sweet poem! I like the circular images you used throughout.
Thank you, Maxie!
Sweet! Love this circle, Mariya! (And have been meaning to thank you for the great prompt on PAD day 1 – “matches”. You can check out my “matches” poem here — if you’d like: http://wanponpopix.blogspot.com/2012/11/close-cover-before-striking-pad-nov-1.html ) 🙂
Aaww .. that’s very sweet and touching.
Pamela and Linda, thanks a lot!
Sweet poem.
Sabra, thanks for your visit! I felt sweet writing it 🙂