Circular

Writing a Circular poem for today, Day 7 of the November Poem-A-Day Chapbook Challenge means we have to either write about something circular, or in a circular form, or whatever we prefer to associate “circular” with. This is a great prompt and I enjoyed it very much.

Image credit: Dreams Time

 

*****

Whenever I reach back

To remember you and me,

Hand in hand, strolling in the park

I have to turn my gaze and see

My little one

Remind me of myself,

Hand in hand with Daddy.

 

Her lovely chestnut curls,

Her shiny eyes like olives,

Her tiny hand in grip of mine,

Her slender body curled asleep

Just next to me,

Remind me of myself

and you, Dad.

 

The circle is complete.

© soulmary

9 replies on “Circular”

  1. That’s lovely Mariya.

  2. Maxie says:

    What a sweet poem! I like the circular images you used throughout.

  3. Sweet! Love this circle, Mariya! (And have been meaning to thank you for the great prompt on PAD day 1 – “matches”. You can check out my “matches” poem here — if you’d like: http://wanponpopix.blogspot.com/2012/11/close-cover-before-striking-pad-nov-1.html ) 🙂

  4. Aaww .. that’s very sweet and touching.

  5. Pamela and Linda, thanks a lot!

  6. Sabra Bowers says:

    Sweet poem.

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