Magpie Tales has the following prompt for this week:

Here is my response:
***
Jingle, sweetness.
My oblivion
Will forever go bejeweled.
© 2011 Mariya Koleva
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Magpie Tales has the following prompt for this week:
Here is my response:
***
Jingle, sweetness.
My oblivion
Will forever go bejeweled.
© 2011 Mariya Koleva
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this is my first visit via magpie.
I am trying very hard to understand the meaning, but there is really no need to understand, is there?
The words will do beautifully.
friko – you are right, no need to understand! I, myself, don’t 🙂 Thanks for commenting.
Lovely
Kristen – thank you very much!
Words seem to go very well with the picture….bejeweled, yes.
Gloria – thanks a lot!
Love the mystique!
Reflections – I appreciate it! Thanks
Fun, solid work.
Steve – thanks a lot!
Nice !!
Nimue – thank you very much!
hehe…i find my own meaning in it and it cracks me up…glitter, glitter…
brian – thanks a lot! glad to see you enjoy it!
“My oblivion / Will forever go bejeweled.” Well phrased. And to quote Mr. Miller, “glitter, glitter” 🙂
dustus – thank you very much!
I had to finally read it backwards as a Shakespherian thing…William is being encouraged on his staying power…
“Bejeweled! Go forever, Will!”
“Oblivion! My sweetness!”
jingle (fade out)
Works perfectly through the kalediscopic mind…good job however it is read, it is fun and thought provoking.
tolbert – you are so nice! I never thought of it that way. And I should have, as kaleidoscope used to be one of my favourite means for “silent amusement” in childhood. Thanks a lot!
Nicely done – it glitters and twinkles 🙂
marousia – thank you very much!
Very nicely thought out…Our imaginations are, indeed, forever bejeweled.
Rick – thank you!
I love this poem! I read the first comment about not understanding the meaning, and it reminded me of quote I read somewhere: “rainbows are to look at, not to understand.” So, too, with poetry sometimes — there isn’t always a very deep meaning, sometimes it’s just about the beauty of image and the sound!
Adi – thanks a lot! I share your opinion exactly. Most times, it’s just that with poetry. We have science for the rest 😉
I love your haiku. I have been fascinated by the different interpretations of this photo.
Liz – thank you very much!
superb!
your words are brilliant and tickling…
Jingle – thanks a lot! The words jingle along with your nick 🙂
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truly love your talent.
Jingle – sure thing! I always want to join, just sometimes I miss the day! You rock, too.