Gloss, Haiku

September Heights #09 – Gloss


October morning

Frost is crisp on flower lips

Gloss remains till spring


Gloss remains till spring

Though those flowers perish fast

Crispy frost stays on


Crispy frost stays on

Flowers bloom on icy glass

Varied shapes and size


Varied shapes and size

Snowflakes swirl in mist outside

Windows sparkle gloss


Windows sparkle gloss

It comes upon a morning

Early October


© 2012 Mariya Koleva



7 replies on “Gloss, Haiku”

  1. Marie Elena says:

    Oooooo … “frost is crisp on flower lips” … LOVELY!

  2. I like the way you connect haiku, so they come a full circle. Crisp images.

  3. Grace says:

    Very nice cascading haiku ~ I specially like flowers bloom in icy glass ~

    As haiku don’t end in rhymes, maybe you can tweak the last one to: early on October ~

  4. Frost as gloss—I like that image!

    Lost Gloss

  5. Amy says:

    I like the repeating lines and how it circles back to the beginning. Great piece, Mariya!

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