September Heights #08 Render
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Marble peak high above
Its violent and stormy breath
Renders me alive
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
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Marble peak high above
Its violent and stormy breath
Renders me alive
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
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I think your title is actually kind of funny–“render, funny verb”! I know that feeling of being in the mountains…
Karin – thanks for stopping by! Yeah, the post title was meant to be funny, because “render” really IS a hard verb. I mean, it means so many things, and most of them are so vague…
at least there were many meanings to choose from! love ‘render me alive’….
4joy – that’s for sure 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
“Renders me alive” – that’s a great line. I like this.
Drawing life–breath!–from a mountain peak. Awesome!
Three Renderings
It is a funny verb, I agree. You’ve got it perfectly though. Lovely haiku.
I like the closing line … “render me alive” ~~
September Heights – Render