Evening Faces

My poetry friend, Kristjaan Panneman from the Carpe Diem haiku blog, has an interesting prompt for haiku lovers. We are supposed to read a poem, get inspired by it and create our own haiku. I found the story behind, and the poem itself really attractive and intriguing. To cut the long story short, go over there and see for yourself. Krisjaan has a magnificent way to introduce prompts, I really love his presentations.

Here is my haiku:

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Carpe Diem – Distillation #2

My eyes believe not
Her face is on the pyre
Evening sky falls apart.

© 2013 Mariya Koleva

7 replies on “Evening Faces”

  1. I can see the sky crying… what a great distillation..

  2. Kristjaan says:

    Nice to see you here again Mariya and with a gorgeous haiku distilled from the poem I gave by Genji. Really you’ve caught the essence of the poem.

  3. Thank you, friends, for your nice comments. It was a pleasure writing this.

  4. Sabra Bowers says:

    Could bring tears. Great job!

  5. Atreyee says:

    Oh,how beautifully expressed!Loved it!

  6. Thanks a lot, Sabra and Atreyee! I really felt for the piece.

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