My poetry friend, Kristjaan Panneman from the Carpe Diem haiku blog, has an interesting prompt for haiku lovers. We are supposed to read a poem, get inspired by it and create our own haiku. I found the story behind, and the poem itself really attractive and intriguing. To cut the long story short, go over there and see for yourself. Krisjaan has a magnificent way to introduce prompts, I really love his presentations.
Here is my haiku:
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Carpe Diem – Distillation #2
My eyes believe not
Her face is on the pyre
Evening sky falls apart.
© 2013 Mariya Koleva
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I can see the sky crying… what a great distillation..
Nice to see you here again Mariya and with a gorgeous haiku distilled from the poem I gave by Genji. Really you’ve caught the essence of the poem.
Wow!
Thank you, friends, for your nice comments. It was a pleasure writing this.
Could bring tears. Great job!
Oh,how beautifully expressed!Loved it!
Thanks a lot, Sabra and Atreyee! I really felt for the piece.