For this Tan Renga Challenge, we had to take an original piece by Santoka Taneda (Tr. John Stevens) and add a second 14-syllable stanza to it.
Here is the final piece:
Autumn heat –
my begging bowl
is full of rice.
The breeze is rich with joy from
summer memories and thoughts.
The prompt was given by Kristjaan at his blog for haiku and Japanese poetry.
You may also like:
What a joy to read your completion Mariya thank you for visiting Carpe Diem after such a long time.