Dark purple aura, Day 14

NaPoWriMo, Day 14

Suddenly spiritual with the Easter Rising coming, here is my poem for today, a response to the Haiku Heights’ prompt word of AURA.

Believe, rise
These enchanted eyes
See aura

See aura
Around all creatures
God is here

God is here
Dark purple aura
Believe, rise

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

15 replies on “Dark purple aura, Day 14”

  1. Tigerbrite says:

    Nice one for Easter 2. Jesus shows himself to his disciples.

  2. Diana Teneva says:

    Amaizing haiku set dedicated to the Orthodox Easter!!!

  3. Thanks to:

    Tigerbite
    Diana

    correct, I connected it to the Easter holidays, although usually I feel worried about such religious mixes. I am not exactly the eclectic type, when it comes to religion. Still, I’m happy this one went so smoothly 🙂

    Happy Easter to all Eastern Orthodox Christians! <3

  4. Ramesh Sood says:

    This is nicely done..

  5. Believe Rise…loved it.

  6. Grace says:

    Nice cascading haiku ~ Rise ~

  7. Simple and holy.

  8. kizmet says:

    lovely! And this is the second haiku written like a loop poem, very very creative I have to say! I enjoyed this very much!

  9. Sharon says:

    Beautiful poem, beautiful subject, and I guess google circles work because that’s where I found the link back to this poem.

  10. Thanks to:

    Ramesh – glad you liked it!

    Mohini – lucky me, with a cool Muse 🙂

    Grace
    Mathew
    kizmet
    Thanks for stopping by! glad you liked it. I’ve been growing more fond of cascades, there days.

    Sharon – yes, it works. I’m glad to see a new face here! Welcome, Sharon and thanks for reading and commenting!

  11. Tim Keen says:

    Very nice poem on a very special day.

    Tim

  12. Tim – thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Glad you enjoyed it!

  13. becca givens says:

    Nice cascading Haiku ~~

  14. wordcoaster says:

    The subject matter fits the cascading circular form perfectly, a literary echo of death and resurrection–nice! 🙂

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