Transition – OSI

OSI#213 Transition – Alouette

Transition best fits
Those willing to quit
Who move away from the dark.
It suddenly starts
As they fall apart
Blazing with beautiful spark. 

Transition itself
Stays hardly on shelf
It often makes for the stars.
Those people remain
In fire and pain
Yet never live behind bars.

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

Author: soul mary

Writer, poet and reader

20 thoughts on “Transition – OSI”

  1. Deborah – thanks a lot! This form – the Alouette, is very cute. Unfortunately, I usually do poor job poeming to forms, as I put too much efforts in the form instead of the content 😀

  2. I like your Alouette, Mariya. I had to look it up so I’d know it’s form. Good job here! 🙂
    You are right too, there aren’t many stars behind bars though I dare say if we were doing what they did they would through away the keys on us.

  3. In fire and pain…very vivid! Great read.
    I haven’t wrapped my head around this prompt yet, but maybe later today.

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