Endurance, haiku

Haiku Heights #112 – Endurance. This may be a senryu, honestly speaking 🙂

 

endurance will

molest the brave of heart till

their final fall.

 

©  Mariya Koleva

Photo by: HMS Endurance Crew on their Antarctic expedition 1915

14 replies on “Endurance, haiku”

  1. It is a senryu, honestly speaking, and a very challenging one at that!

    Poppies Lack Endurance

  2. Write Girl says:

    You’ve written a powerful haiku here.

  3. Thanks a lot to:

    Magical – it is, isn’t it? I thought so 🙂
    Write Girl – encouraging words!

  4. Endurance is a hardship, so much easier not to dare, to sit at home in front of the TV and achieve nothing.

  5. Ellecee says:

    I like this very much. Very strong words. Well done.

  6. Yousei Hime says:

    Very powerful, even in its brevity. Well done.

  7. mareymercy says:

    Lovely word choice!

  8. Misky says:

    That one certainly made me stop and think! Well done.

  9. Hello Mariya, nicely done. Well … I think you are right, this looks more like a senryu, but that doesn’t matter I loved reading this one.

    Namaste

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