Haiku Heights #112 – Endurance. This may be a senryu, honestly speaking π
Β
endurance will
molest the brave of heart till
their final fall.
© Mariya Koleva
Photo by: HMS Endurance Crew on their Antarctic expedition 1915
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Haiku Heights #112 – Endurance. This may be a senryu, honestly speaking π
Β
endurance will
molest the brave of heart till
their final fall.
© Mariya Koleva
Photo by: HMS Endurance Crew on their Antarctic expedition 1915
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It is a senryu, honestly speaking, and a very challenging one at that!
Poppies Lack Endurance
You’ve written a powerful haiku here.
Thanks a lot to:
Magical – it is, isn’t it? I thought so π
Write Girl – encouraging words!
Endurance is a hardship, so much easier not to dare, to sit at home in front of the TV and achieve nothing.
Bruce – π
I like this very much. Very strong words. Well done.
Thank you for the encouraging words, Ellecee π
Very powerful, even in its brevity. Well done.
Thanks, Yousei!
Lovely word choice!
Thank you, mareymercy π
That one certainly made me stop and think! Well done.
Misky – I’m glad I did that π
Hello Mariya, nicely done. Well … I think you are right, this looks more like a senryu, but that doesn’t matter I loved reading this one.
Namaste