Two lines

The two lines come from annell

The Big Tent Poetry is taking leave. Its farewell prompt was to use two lines by another poet and make our own poem. Here is what I wrote:

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The difficulty
Of squeezing an elephant
Through the eye of a needle

is comparable to
the difficulty
of making your child
go this way, instead of any other.

As parents know.

Which one is more practicable?
I wish I knew for sure.

© 2011 Mariya Koleva

Author: soul mary

Writer, poet and reader

11 thoughts on “Two lines”

  1. Frustration has created more clubs than imaginable. I understood perfectly and immediately wanted to sit down and have a cup of something with you.

    Elizabeth

  2. Once they’re raised, these moments become wonderful points of discussion. Family life does help us grow, doesn’t it?

  3. Thank you, Deb, Kim, Laurie, Elizabeth, Pamela, Lindsay, annell and Henry :-)! You made my day! I’m happy so many fellow-poets liked what I wrote!

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