Wordle – Embroidered seaweed

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The wordle of the Wordling Whirl of Sundays is above. Below, is my contribution:
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The seaweed supersedes the tugs of rope.
It seems embroidered
as dainty as some gentle mist.
Evaporation from the river.

The water breathes
releasing tiny slides of whisper
And all float free down south.

© 2011 Mariya Koleva

9 replies on “Wordle – Embroidered seaweed”

  1. Stan Ski says:

    Let me be the first to congratulate you on your amazingly concise post, using ALL the words… even BREATHES… 😉
    Seriously good!

  2. Mary says:

    Very well done! I like ‘tiny slides of whisper.’

  3. brenda w says:

    Mary, Beautiful. You did the words justice!

  4. pamelasayers says:

    I love it when someone can make a nice cohesive, concise poem with a group of words. Beautiful, Mary.

    Pamela

  5. Great use and presentation of the words. You didn’t waste a thing. I like a nice tight poem. Good job.

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