Amazed with my soul
that sighs in silent music tones
and busts in awful failures.
The system needs restart
to the level of awesomeness
it enjoyed a while ago.
My head’s a mess,
even more so than my verse.
If there exists a visit
of reason and rhyme,
trump me with it.
The CD spins its endless tune.
I get off, all dressed up for party –
a kick-ass princess with a headache.
© 2015, MK
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Wonderful word choice throughout love the climatic ending leading right back to the title … Thanks for the share – I haven’t posted my usuals this morning – yours was a treat 🙂
Thanks for the visit and your nice words, Pearl. 🙂
Really like the lines “if there exists visit of reason and rhyme, trump me with it.”
You had me at the title. 🙂 Sorry she has a headache, though.
Interesting poem, my friend…
I’ve been trying to re-start my system for a while, now, not sure how successful I’ve been.
Not sure it’s ever been at the level of awesomeness…quite good, maybe, hee, hee!
My ankle is what’s a mess…the verse, peculiar and offbeat as it can often be is just fine, thank you! 😀
Thanks:
Sabra – sometimes one doesn’t know which exact words will do the trick 😉
De – too much partying, not enough poeming seems to be bad for some heads… Perhaps… lol
Kiril – well, at least in verse we may call ourselves “awesome” and not sound too arrogant 😀
Thank you, dear friends.
The last line works a dramatic spin on the sugary fairytales of pretty princesses. A fun one.
A kick ass princess – is there any other kind…you need a little fight when the world is messy – wonderful playful and meaningful poem
I love the last six lines. 🙂