September Heights #12 – Rain and Tackle it Tuesday – kigo
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Abandoned fields where
Only winds and thorns will ride
Host the silent rain
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Grey sky frowns eyebrows
High wind empties the sidewalks
Rage against the sun
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
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I expected thorns to grow, but you show them to me riding. Excellent imagery!
Seven Rains
Powerful imagery
Wow! Mariya what a wonderful set of haiku. I love the way you’ve composed these. The first one is my favorite it’s a very strong image you paint here with your words.
The last line of the second ‘rage against the sun’ is very well composed … very different with other haiku I have read on this theme rain/kigo.
Thank you for sharing these with us. And I am so glad that you’ve found the way to my weekly meme ‘Tackle It Tuesday’. Your participation in this meme I appreciate.
Very well done. I love how creative you are and they sound so wonderful when read out loud! Great job!
Mine is here
Have you a FANTABULOUS WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira
Let every kind of place host the silent rain 🙂 Lovely
I like “grey sky frowns eyebrows” …
September Heights – Skies’ Joy