There are process notes with this one.
– While on lunch break, I couldn’t come up with a haiku. The first poem is the one I wrote. Later, when I came home and sat down to post, I decided to edit my original poem a bit, but hated to lose any of the images I had, so I turned it into two haiku. Maybe not the best result, but I believe it is good enough.
Carpe Diem #301 – Harvest Moon
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Blowing the winds of reality
autumn reminds of itself –
paradise of yellowness.
Come closer and feed your vision.
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Blowing the winds of
reality, autumn is
so full of itself.
Paradise of moon,
yellowness will come closer
Feeding your vision
© 2013 Mariya Koleva
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Nicely done Mariya… the re-done version is a gem.
It’s interesting to document the process.. your last one is perfect