Fate

Haiku Heights #109 Fate

Fate will call me to
its edge – oblique, transparent
to stare in dismay.

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

Image courtesy: My friend Dil, who is a fervent adversary of social media, but should, I feel, be mentioned.

9 replies on “Fate”

  1. Leo says:

    I like this. Fate having an edge to it, which we can’t see, as it is see-through!

  2. Grace says:

    Very nice…I like Fate calling me…but in the end, its really our choice, isn’t it ?

  3. carol says:

    Mariya ~ well done haiku ~ very contemplative ~ namaste, Carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/ HH ^_^

  4. You did a very nice job on the prompt Fate. Thank you for sharing.

  5. Karen says:

    Very nice. I like the thought of fate being transparent.

  6. becca givens says:

    Nice direction ~~

  7. Thanks a lot:
    Leo – I myself did not have a clue Fate had an edge to it 🙂
    Grace – that is exactly my opinion, too.
    Carol – sweet words 🙂
    Chevrefeuille – very nice of you to read and comment on my haiku!
    Karen – transparency always makes me feel things are not too bad 🙂
    zongrik – sometimes it gets too transparent, I’m afraid.
    becca – fate chose this direction, not me 😉

  8. I think I know that feeling of dismay…

    Fate Has Blessed Them

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