Poets United, Thursday Think Tank #86 – Rebirth
Rebirth will need
a death.
last breath
given away.
first gulp
taken in thirst.
Recreate those gloomy
pieces of my way
where I stumble
gasping
for that breath of
rebirth.
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
Image copied from Poets United prompt post
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rebirth will need a death could give you a headache if you think about it too much 😉
It’s amazing how I just assumed the death without thinking about it. Nice write.
I could ponder that first line forever! Great line. 🙂
Thanks a lot to:
zongrik – you can’t be more right about that. Yet, the prompt called for it 😀
booguloo – very nice of you to like it 🙂
RMaS – happy you liked it!
where I stumble
gasping
for that breath of
rebirth.
i kinda related to these words…i have moments when this though predominates and then i realise that these things are not in my hands…but yes..what if….
nicely penned 🙂
Aashi – thank you for your kind words!