Rebirth

Poets United, Thursday Think Tank #86 – Rebirth

Rebirth will need
a death.
last breath
given away.
first gulp
taken in thirst. 

Recreate those gloomy
pieces of my way
where I stumble
gasping
for that breath of
rebirth.

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

Image copied from Poets United prompt post

6 replies on “Rebirth”

  1. zongrik says:

    rebirth will need a death could give you a headache if you think about it too much 😉

  2. booguloo says:

    It’s amazing how I just assumed the death without thinking about it. Nice write.

  3. I could ponder that first line forever! Great line. 🙂

  4. Thanks a lot to:
    zongrik – you can’t be more right about that. Yet, the prompt called for it 😀
    booguloo – very nice of you to like it 🙂
    RMaS – happy you liked it!

  5. Aashi says:

    where I stumble
    gasping
    for that breath of
    rebirth.

    i kinda related to these words…i have moments when this though predominates and then i realise that these things are not in my hands…but yes..what if….

    nicely penned 🙂

  6. Aashi – thank you for your kind words!

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