The fervent breeze
Sweeps dust
That cloaks our skins.
*
The trunk turns to a vessel
Containing truth and
Residue of matter.
© 2011 Mariya Koleva
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The fervent breeze
Sweeps dust
That cloaks our skins.
*
The trunk turns to a vessel
Containing truth and
Residue of matter.
© 2011 Mariya Koleva
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Concise and without unnecessary words to fill up!! You have said a lot with just a few!! I like that 🙂
Thank you, Nanka! I just finished explaining the meaning of each word to my husband, as they were all unfamiliar to him, which, of course, took away a lot from its heart 🙂
Welcome to our wordle poem group! This is a wonderful poem, very compact and powerful. Well done. 🙂
Lean, spare and, may I say, fervent!
Wordle 19 poem
Your blog wouldn’t open yesterday, so I’m happy it did today. 🙂 I agree with Nanka. These eight short lines speak volumes. Well done!
Thanks to:
Traci B – thank you for the warm welcome and your nice words!
Magical Mystical Teacher – lean is cute 😉
brenda w – you are very kind!
Thanks for reading and for your opinions!
..the residue of matter… a most excellent exit..
miss pie – thanks a lot!