Wordle – Fervent breeze, Vessel of truth

Sunday Wordle #19

 

The fervent breeze

Sweeps dust

That cloaks our skins.

*

The trunk turns to a vessel

Containing truth and

Residue of matter.

 

© 2011 Mariya Koleva

8 replies on “Wordle – Fervent breeze, Vessel of truth”

  1. Nanka says:

    Concise and without unnecessary words to fill up!! You have said a lot with just a few!! I like that 🙂

    • Thank you, Nanka! I just finished explaining the meaning of each word to my husband, as they were all unfamiliar to him, which, of course, took away a lot from its heart 🙂

  2. Traci B says:

    Welcome to our wordle poem group! This is a wonderful poem, very compact and powerful. Well done. 🙂

  3. Lean, spare and, may I say, fervent!

    Wordle 19 poem

  4. brenda w says:

    Your blog wouldn’t open yesterday, so I’m happy it did today. 🙂 I agree with Nanka. These eight short lines speak volumes. Well done!

    • Thanks to:
      Traci B – thank you for the warm welcome and your nice words!
      Magical Mystical Teacher – lean is cute 😉
      brenda w – you are very kind!
      Thanks for reading and for your opinions!

  5. miss pie says:

    ..the residue of matter… a most excellent exit..

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