At first I wrote … the first one 🙂 Then I counted the syllables and you know the rest. The second one is perhaps the one.

myth for the september haiku heights

Image: Karezoid

Haiku Heights, 2013 September Heights #20


Disbelieving the incredible
Rede of heroic past
Only blood on the tree bark.

Incredible tale
Of past glory and heroes
Blood traces will stay.

© 2013 Mariya Koleva

2 replies on “Myth”

  1. Linda E.H. says:

    I like both.

    • soul mary says:

      Thanks, Linda. That is exactly why I share both – I can’t discard either. I love them both 🙂 Besides, I always believe more words say more… A strange statement for a haiku poet.

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