Rhythm, Day 24

NaPoWriMo, Day 24

1. Acrostic Only, SW – Rhythm

Rhythm rules the abyss

Hailing over dead wood

You wasted time alone

Timeless patterns get you

Hunting on your own

Mindful, random and forlorn.


2. Poetic Asides – Morning 

Blue highways
Rolling over
Your sleepiness 

On that blissful verge
Your dreamy blinks abide 

Still sleepy self can feel
The blue outside
Where birds are chirring 

Is there coffee steaming?

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

8 replies on “Rhythm, Day 24”

  1. Misky says:

    Yes, coffee is brewing! I loved the morning poem. 🙂

  2. brian miller says:

    smiles…i def like the second…and coffee is currently brewing and i looking forward to my first cup here in a few minutes…

  3. DianaTeneva says:

    Wow! The second one is amazing!!!
    The first one is very deep!!! especially the last three lines.
    “Timeless patterns get you

    Hunting on your own

    Mindful, random and forlorn.”

  4. Mary says:

    I just love your morning poem.

    “Blue highways
    rolling over
    your sleepiness” is truly inspired!

    And…I am drinking MY coffee as I write!

  5. Tansi says:

    a great start of my day – a poem with my morning coffee… thanks…

  6. Marie Elena says:

    Great poems, both! And It’s 5:00 p.m., and I am smelling our after-dinner coffee brewing as I type. 😉

  7. Apurva says:

    Sounds so rhythmic 🙂

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