Places Change (and Stretch)

Happy to say the Sunday Whirl has its 100th weekly prompt on! Thanks to Brenda and her dedication, we are able to enjoy this wonderful community, to write more poems and to enjoy even more 🙂

Here is the wordle:

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Places change, they stretch and faint

in time when trains arrive to share

calls sombre, well-behaved,

and weird words.

They create and master our mood.

Out on the street we blindly brood –

a silent march

 

Where places change

to never die.

© 2013 Mariya Koleva

15 replies on “Places Change (and Stretch)”

  1. Stan Ski says:
    17/03/2013 at 13:15

    Agreed… Change is a crucial part of survival…

  2. Jae Rose says:
    17/03/2013 at 13:40

    I love the rhythm of this…like moving on regardless..and with strength..

  3. Mary - Phoenix EM says:
    17/03/2013 at 13:42

    Thank you, Jae!

  4. Magical Mystical Teacher says:
    17/03/2013 at 14:05

    Places change…and the change is often imperceptible.

    Like Jae Rose, I also appreciate the rhythm of this poem. There’s something about rhythm that pulls us along in a piece–like a train!

  5. Laurie Kolp says:
    17/03/2013 at 14:41

    Hi, Mariya- Lovely wordle here. Change can be positive…

  6. brenda w says:
    17/03/2013 at 16:59

    The changes can change us, too. Nice work. Thanks for joining in for number 100!

  7. Walt Wojtanik says:
    18/03/2013 at 05:33

    Ah, Mariya.Your style is very distinctive and expressive. I find something in each piece that draws me to read more. Thanks for this..

  8. Misky says:
    18/03/2013 at 18:17

    You are such a tidy, and easy to read poet! I love your work, M. xx

  9. Mary - Phoenix EM says:
    18/03/2013 at 20:05

    Dear Walt and Misky, thank you very much for your kind words! Although you haven’t read each other’s comments, they coincide amazingly 🙂

  10. Sabra Bowers says:
    19/03/2013 at 14:46

    I really like the last line. Everything does change and change means life.
    Well done wordle.

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