September Heights #26 – Paper Boat
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As the river flows
The weeping willow suffers
Paper boat moves on
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
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As the river flows
The weeping willow suffers
Paper boat moves on
© 2012 Mariya Koleva
Comments are closed.
Ow, so evocative and well written
Very well written!
Very nice … a real haiku. Could be of a classical haiku master.
This has a sad note to me. The willow may weep for the intrepid little boat, knowing what is to come.
You capture a moment and I can feel the tension.
…moves on until it’s waterlogged…
Paper Boat
The relationship between the three captivates the reader
nicely penned