Paper Boat

September Heights #26 – Paper Boat

 

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As the river flows

The weeping willow suffers

Paper boat moves on

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

7 replies on “Paper Boat”

  1. Ow, so evocative and well written

  2. Syed Umr says:

    Very well written!

  3. Very nice … a real haiku. Could be of a classical haiku master.

  4. Patti says:

    This has a sad note to me. The willow may weep for the intrepid little boat, knowing what is to come.

  5. poetrydiary says:

    You capture a moment and I can feel the tension.

  6. …moves on until it’s waterlogged…

    Paper Boat

  7. Leslie says:

    The relationship between the three captivates the reader
    nicely penned

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