No dice, Day 22

NaPoWriMo, Day 22

Magpie Tales #114

Acrostic Only (TW) – No Dice

Being Poetry – Dreams

No dreams
Ordinary spells 

Dreaming underwater
Isolated perfectly
Casket around
Equally forgotten

© 2012 Mariya Koleva

Image by Alex Stoddart

9 replies on “No dice, Day 22”

  1. brian miller says:

    several have focused on the isolation…and it makes me wonder if he did it to himself you know….we do that metaphorically all the time…nice acrostic

  2. brian – you know, I’ve been wondering the same… Obviously, I decided he did 🙂 On the other hand, it would be very cruel if it was somebody else’s doing. I could not poem on that, I think… Thanks for the comment!

  3. Tess Kincaid says:

    I like the acrostic form here…no nice indeed…

  4. Tess, thanks a lot!

  5. I enjoyed it and especially liked the acrostic element too.

  6. Linda Fraser says:

    I love the idea of dreaming underwater. Is it possible? Not so much, I’m thinking. Thank you for sharing this interesting acrostic, Mary. =D

  7. Thanks to:

    Madeleine – glad you liked it 🙂

    Linda – I think dreams are out of the question in such a situation 😀

  8. Kutamun says:

    Im changing my will, i want to be buried in an aquarium , or maybe i already am !, thanks

  9. Kutamun – you’re welcome! Thanks for visiting and commenting!

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