Matches

How cool is it to be writing to your own prompt! Very cool! And very serious.

November PAD Challenge 2012 beginning: Click here to read more

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strike a match

with that gentle touch of your

hand which holds my

heart agile and waiting

afloat long waking

Believing in the magic of

that unmatched and

matchless

unprecedented

inextinguishable

fire of your breath

applied to my cold cheeks

That irrational thrill in my

dreaming memory of a

“Safety Matches” box

I still cling to

at night

© 2012 soulmary

10 replies on “Matches”

  1. De Jackson says:

    Just beautiful, Mariya. I’m especially touched by these lines:
    “that gentle touch of your

    hand which holds my

    heart agile and waiting”

    Ohhhh. Beautiful.
    This was a great prompt. Thank you so much! And Happy November!
    de

  2. ladynimue says:

    Now who can match such magic 😉

  3. Mama Zen says:

    Oh, that is beautiful!

  4. It all flows beautifully, especially the second half, which turns and sparkles like a jewel in the light. Thanks.

  5. Rorybore says:

    Love the imagery and how beautifully it all flows together. Great theme for Day 1.

  6. Sara v says:

    Hi Mariya, Loved this prompt–funny our muses took the same sort of path, love how you shaped yours and the flow–poetic and artistic 🙂

  7. Many thanks to:
    Buddah – you are welcome, your words are so kind 🙂
    Rorybore – glad you enjoyed both my poem and the prompt 🙂
    Sara v – so nice to get so much support and approval for my prompt.

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