After a long, longish absence, I am happy to be back on the Poetic Bloomings site and on one of their prompts. This is a great and curious prompt. You know how a wordle works, right? Well, this, as I called it “Evasive Wordle” works almost the same way. Only, you have to replace the original words with synonyms or descriptions. Or, were descriptions allowed? Hm, not sure, but anyway, I used some.
Here is the wordpool: challenge, common, mask, skill, origin, love, night, drink, beauty, death
Enjoy my Evasive Wordle, entitled
Gorgeous Sight on the Dance Stage
The gorgeous sight on the dance stage
before my eyes
is a harsh ordeal
beyond my ability, yet
I have to overcome it
while wearing the dull disguise
of one seeking escape of life -
its boredom and affection.
My ability abandons me
from dusk till dawn.
I have to sit and sip in lonely gulps
what someone brings me,
of nature unknown,
just to see my leering mirror reflection
and remember the gorgeous sight on the dance stage.
© 2013, Mariya Koleva
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Nicely done, Mariya. All you needed was for the words to inspire. Once you had that, anything your did to it was on track!
Nice Mariya – this took me somewhere totally unexpected and I forget it was wordled (in a way) completely … excellent.
Sharon, I must admit the twist it took surprised me, too.
Thanks for visiting!
I like the repetition of: The gorgeous sight on the dance stage ~ It could be anything lost or deprived from us, but one we had to let go ~
Happy to read you ~