Kaleidoscope, NaPoWriMo Day 25

Magpie Tales has the following prompt for this week:

kaleidoscope

Here is my response:

***
Jingle, sweetness.
My oblivion
Will forever go bejeweled.

© 2011 Mariya Koleva

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April 25th, 2011 | Tags: APRPAD, kaleidoscope, magpie tales prompts, NaPoWriMo, oblivion | Category: #Poetry

30 comments to Kaleidoscope, NaPoWriMo Day 25

• friko

  25/04/2011 at 18:03

  this is my first visit via magpie.

  I am trying very hard to understand the meaning, but there is really no need to understand, is there?
  The words will do beautifully.

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  25/04/2011 at 18:17

  friko – you are right, no need to understand! I, myself, don’t Thanks for commenting.

• Kristen Haskell

  26/04/2011 at 00:36

  Lovely

• Gloria

  26/04/2011 at 03:48

  Words seem to go very well with the picture….bejeweled, yes.

• Reflections

  26/04/2011 at 05:23

  Love the mystique!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  26/04/2011 at 09:04

  Kristen – thank you very much!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  26/04/2011 at 09:04

  Gloria – thanks a lot!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  26/04/2011 at 09:04

  Reflections – I appreciate it! Thanks

• Steve Isaak

  26/04/2011 at 18:36

  Fun, solid work.

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  27/04/2011 at 09:00

  Steve – thanks a lot!

• Nimue

  27/04/2011 at 10:58

  Nice !!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  27/04/2011 at 11:05

  Nimue – thank you very much!

• brian

  27/04/2011 at 13:19

  hehe…i find my own meaning in it and it cracks me up…glitter, glitter…

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  27/04/2011 at 13:38

  brian – thanks a lot! glad to see you enjoy it!

• dustus

  27/04/2011 at 15:39

  “My oblivion / Will forever go bejeweled.” Well phrased. And to quote Mr. Miller, “glitter, glitter”

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  27/04/2011 at 15:41

  dustus – thank you very much!

• tolbert

  27/04/2011 at 17:11

  I had to finally read it backwards as a Shakespherian thing…William is being encouraged on his staying power…

  “Bejeweled! Go forever, Will!”
  “Oblivion! My sweetness!”

  jingle (fade out)

  Works perfectly through the kalediscopic mind…good job however it is read, it is fun and thought provoking.

• marousia

  28/04/2011 at 02:00

  Nicely done – it glitters and twinkles

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  28/04/2011 at 08:11

  tolbert – you are so nice! I never thought of it that way. And I should have, as kaleidoscope used to be one of my favourite means for “silent amusement” in childhood. Thanks a lot!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  28/04/2011 at 08:11

  marousia – thank you very much!

• Rick

  29/04/2011 at 01:04

  Very nicely thought out…Our imaginations are, indeed, forever bejeweled.

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  29/04/2011 at 09:18

  Rick – thank you!

• Adriana

  29/04/2011 at 14:18

  I love this poem! I read the first comment about not understanding the meaning, and it reminded me of quote I read somewhere: “rainbows are to look at, not to understand.” So, too, with poetry sometimes — there isn’t always a very deep meaning, sometimes it’s just about the beauty of image and the sound!

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  29/04/2011 at 15:11

  Adi – thanks a lot! I share your opinion exactly. Most times, it’s just that with poetry. We have science for the rest

• Liz Rice-Sosne

  29/04/2011 at 23:28

  I love your haiku. I have been fascinated by the different interpretations of this photo.

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  30/04/2011 at 13:23

  Liz – thank you very much!

• Jingle

  30/04/2011 at 16:21

  superb!

  your words are brilliant and tickling…

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  30/04/2011 at 19:37

  Jingle – thanks a lot! The words jingle along with your nick

• Jingle Poetry

  02/05/2011 at 17:34

  Join poetry potluck,
  Expose your talent to wider audience today,
  Share, have fun!
  Happy May!
  You Rock!
  xxx

  truly love your talent.

• Mary - Phoenix EM

  03/05/2011 at 10:23

  Jingle – sure thing! I always want to join, just sometimes I miss the day! You rock, too.